I have received feedback on my double page spread to find out how I can improve it. The first comment I received is that there is too much text on the page and that the spacing is off, I am going to redo the layout of my text so that I am able to use the space available on the page better. I am also going to take out some of the text on the page so that the page isn't as crowed and change the spacing of the text. I am planning on moving the Title and intro up onto the top section of the page so that I have more space to use underneath. Apart from this the feedback I have received has shown me that I have used a good background and good positioning of the pictures either side.
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